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Silentily I die
And I live again
I died for your lie
Between roses and pain

My blood was red
Now my soul is black
You sing in my head
But I can't go back

I walk undead
Alone in my blue
I see my bed
And sadly I remember you

Since your soul were
Unfaithful
Your lovespell was
So beautiful

Then you broke my heart
Poisoning me inside
I had no more art
But homicide

And when my knife
Gave your soul to the sky
I enchained my life
In an eternal cry
©2004-2009 ~tearsofindifference
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Author's Comments

I don't know if Gothic is the right classification for this text but I think is the most similar classification.
I written this little poem during a french lesson trying to find my language limits.
I hope to submit soon something in Italian, 'cos in Italian my potential is very bigger than in English, but I don't know if I will submit a translation because a translation may be only a limited version of the original text

PS: Thanks Franca for having found a mistake in the writing ;)

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I love it
good work :clap:

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"I'm not afraid to keep on living, I'm not afraid to walk this world alone..." - MCR

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